inhale~
exhale~
repetitiously
relaxation of mind
brings comforting peace
burdens of the day disappearing
loosening up the body's recovering
as fatigue's slowly fading
heart beats slow
self meditation
mends the
body &
soul
Author notes
prompt: mending
no more than 40 words
no erotica
no profanity
A contest entry
- mending by going nowhere.
700 points, ended March 21, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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How true meditation is a wondrous way to heel body mind and soul. Nicely done. Best to you
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Nothing like a nice quiet time to meditate and refresh oneself after the woes of the day, well done baby, I love you...Scott
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Good take on the prompt as well as the form here, T...Creatively fashioned, and cleverly scribed...with lots of depth of meaning to this write.. All the best in the contest!
write 
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I love this sis it is very calming and relaxing and so very very true!!!! Sometimes we just have to take a breather sometimes!!!!! I love the way that you wrote this Your words are so gentle!!!!!!! This is very lovely and beautifully portrayed!!!!!! I love it!!!! I LOVE U!!!!!!!
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I see this was a BBM (Bible Bowel Movement) and as such was very nice! I like the serenity. Like a spray of Glade purifying the air.
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Very nice take on the prompt and the form adds to it as well.
Well Done...Best wishes in the contest
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you are correct in your piece, everyone should meditate... good luck
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Love the flow of this. Slow building, full expression then slowly ending. Love form poetry
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You tied it all together in a perfect
package---well done.
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This is very soft and comforting, beautifully weaved in splendid form.
The flow is exellent and the images are soothing.
Nicely done, a good one to go to sleep t
Thanks for sharing your poetic muse.
Be blessed in all you do.
Tony
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Ahhhh, yes, and along with a few other things that are 'very' relaxing.
Enjoyed this hun,
All the best,
mj.
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indeed..and I need to check on that part lol, i need some good relaxation.
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Very restful.
Thanks for sharing.
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i may need to try that as i head to bed, so i can peacefully sleep... inhale, exhale. thank you for your entry.
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