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Sometimes Poetry is Simple

Black socks
reaching 2
thumbs past
my ankle
(I measured
it)

Author notes

Written in Journalism, on a matchbox (which explains the line breaks)

I like simple poetry

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  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    November 1
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    *chuckles* Not much to be said; short and sweet...


  • Spideresque
    August 16
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    this probably isn't what you want to hear, but it strikes me as adorable ^_^

  • uhhhhhhhh okay a poem about socks? that was really short like um why did you bother short. Makes no sence really either. I am glad you entered though.

  • ok this was a bit amusing. Kinda cute. This was well written and cute. Thank you for sharing this very much

  • great!

    so simplistic as your title says! but really quite amusing with the ( I measured it) part ^_^ great work keep it up


  • Heavens Child
    April 16

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    This is really great! Poetry is as simple as putt'n on your socks! I love how you end it, very clever. A unique write!

  • jadeangyal
    April 2

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    I like your handle, but I don't understand this poem. From reading the comments of others, I have decided to investigate your works further...

    • Don't look to far into it.
      Nothing hidden, nothing symbolic, nothing implied.
      Simply simple poetry.


  • Poetic Rage
    March 29
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    SO simple but to the point that you was trying to make.I love simple work how it is so raw but it gets to the point fast. It speaks to you through so few words but you understand the meaning behind. And to write about socks that reach two thumbs past your ankle is awesome!!!


    Great Write!!!


  • otepsaint
    March 23
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    me2

    I lust it... i lust all of your work! keep it up...
    ~AIie

  • I love your poetry, and I cannot wait for the day we collaborate in some.

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