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Lilith

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In God’s lost garden
one sultry eve
Adam came to me
as I knelt among spent blossoms
beneath the apple tree

I felt his breath upon my neck
as he whispered in my ear
“Sweet Lilith
let me feast on you”
and he drew my body near.

I shivered as I felt his tongue
deftly lick my lobe
and travel down my neck
to seek
the heaven of a milky globe

In innocence I arched my back
seeking his embrace
never dreaming
that his wondrous touch
would lead to my disgrace

I felt his fingers slither down
and I spread my virgin thighs
the ache for him
was building
as I matched his primal cries

I was burning deep inside
for what I had no clue
until he thrust
into my core
and knocked my world askew

He rode me there
beneath the tree
on the petal littered ground
and I gloried in abandon and
the ecstasy I found

As passion shattered into shards
I realized my mistake
I was locked in rapture with
a shrouded
sinful snake.

So weep for me ye mortals
as for heaven you all pray
for God will surly
banish those
by the serpent led astray.


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"Lilith" by John Collier

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  • Tylers Baby
    March 23
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    very nice write i really like the story that goes with this. well done.

  • Whoa!!!!

    What a write!!!!

    I love the imagery, the style, and exquisite rhyme.

    You did a great job with ths one

    I really love the ending.

    Did you mean "surely" in the second from last line?