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Impotent

Hold my hand
As we watch this tower crumble
And form a hill before our feet

Hold my attention
While I divert my eyes
From the castle I built in noble intentions

Like Babel, we watched for centuries while this fortress crumbled
For the arrogance of trying to kiss
Not heaven
But simply content

Hold my hand
As we realize that these solid walls
Will go unrepaired

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