Time may be against me,
but I know I'll persevere,
my heart still beats,
and your hands carry all the hate in me.
You bear a burden,
not many could stand,
I'm heartless and cold,
withered and broken,
but you give me life,
a sun without a flower,
and a flower without a sun,
cease to be.
All I really need from you,
is to have your hands in mine,
make me believe that I,
truly am the world,
you always wanted to see.
I know that whats you do for me.
So kiss me,
tell me you love me,
And I'll die happy.
Please darling,
I'm waiting...
A contest entry
- My Dreams of Love by Merciful-Manner.
1000 points, ended March 20, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
love the darkness, breathe the cataclysmic self indulgence
Comments
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Beautiful.
I loved this poem because I think you spoke from deep within your soul. Deeper, I think, than you usually go.
your best lines were:
"a sun without a flower,
and a flower without a sun,
cease to be."
Stunning.
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Well done
Great write, I really enjoyed it very much so. Um I like it, you really showed good imagery, and yes the last kiss we all need it so much!
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