Some where I saw him
feeling his spirit
I turned
I looked
I cried
I knew
for you see
He was gone in the flesh
But still lives on in me
When death hurts
When you lose
Your body hungers
to feel his touch
I close my eyes
Then I will see
his hands still holding
and caressing me
A contest entry
- Contest 2 of Suffering and Pain. Loss by MichaelSavage.
625 points, ended March 20, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 25 prewrites! make it a good one :) by etoile.
800 points, ended April 14, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This is very sad indeed and speaks of a desire to holdon for an eternity to what might one day be gone forever.
Well deserving the silver trophy, congratulations!
I like it, I like it so!
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this is so sad and heartbreaking. the emotions you wrote about I can really relate to. this is a great poem.
goodluck and thanks for entering -
I love this. Beautiful rhyme and flow. Its touching.
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thank you honey hugss love
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