Seems like just yesterday
we were holding hands
and talking about our future together
and how that seemed to be so far away
It seems as if neither of us understands
that we may not be together forever
that something may one day tear us apart
and away from one anothers heart
I can't imagine life without you
but if that's what destiny has in store
what else can I do
it seems like so long ago when we first met
even though it has only been over a year since that day
back in October when you made
me realize just how perfect you were
and just how meant to be this was
you swept me off my feet
and you never put me back on solid ground
you made me see there was nobody else out there
that could make our lives more perfect than each other
and now I am scared that one day that too
will be ripped from my hands
I have never met someone
quite as special as you
and you don't even have to try
one day without you and I would go insane
you're my lifeline
the one I turn to when all else fails
there will never be another like you
in my eyes we are soulmates
I just hope fate sees it my way too
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Awesome :)
Wow....I know how this feels cuz im so deep in it right now...this is love. Your poetry has a certain charm to it...dont worry about *destiny* tearing you apart...make your own destiny! You cant let a love like this go.
Great poem,nice flow. I liked it!
-Megan
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This is the most beautiful poem you have ever written in my opinion.
Such great Love only comes along once in a life time. My vocabulary fails to express how great a write this is .
And I can just feel that every word comes direct from your Heart, Revise it Change it never not one word it is perfect as it is.
When I got to the last two lines I felt something wet slide down my right cheek. Let fate take its course you two just guide it along and things will turn out your way.
Love you
PapPaw.
* rose*
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