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I can't believe it

Time moves so fast
and I barely drag along
I don't know what has happened
by the time I catch up
this don't seem real that you're gone
you were here only just a few days ago
I can't cry I can barely show emotion
but I miss you I really do
I am in denial
I can't believe you're really gone
I barely knew you
and I hoped that I'd get to know you better
hoped that this wouldn't happen
I knew it was coming
Actually I think we all knew
we were just hoping not this soon
I miss you
you were like a mom to me
you just never knew
and now it's too late to tell you
I love you

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  • Time focus on Me
    March 28

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    hey sis

    I can't believe you're really gone
    I barely knew you
    and I hoped that I'd get to know you better
    hoped that this wouldn't happen
    I knew it was coming
    Actually I think we all knew
    we were just hoping not this soon
    I miss you
    you were like a mom to me
    you just never knew
    and now it's too late to tell you
    I love you
    Beautiful job with this poem.. u did a great job.. Keep da ink flowin..