Your black main flows gently in the breeze
Your fur is not brown but still not yellow
the way you stand is just the best
I love your long tail and ears
because it fits you so nice
just as the unusual color end at the legs the black blends in
not standing to tall or to short
you are a beautiful creature of god.
A contest entry
- A Horse of Another Color by apoeticinjustice.
850 points, ended March 29, 17 entries
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Comments
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Those buckskins are beautiful horses! You've painted a wonderful picture with your words. A very enjoyable read. Well done.
Rory
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a wonderful description of what I am sure is a fine looking horse.
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Looks good in the paddock
I'm sure Rory enjoyed this contest entry.
Suggested changes: 'main' should be mane'. 'nice' should probably be 'nicely', 'end' should be 'ends'. Should there be an 'and' after legs?
If you are using 'god' as a proper name for supreme being, then it is capitalised, 'God'.
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aww my friend your words are so truly lovely and gentle!!! This is a truly lovely piece so beautiful are ur words!!!! You never cease to impress me!!!!! I love ur details and descriptions the way that you describe the buckskin!!!! Your imagery is perfect and vivid!!!!! I can picture this in my mind!!!!!! I love it!!!! Well done my friend!!!!!!!
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