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Bronze...Our Secret Love

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If only we could tell someone

and reveal for all the world to see

how much we need and desire each other

and that you only have feelings for me

 

Each morning you look at me with desire

in return I melt in your loving arms

starting our day with sensual love

there is no way I can resist your charms

 

You make me the queen of your domain

and you are my soul mate and king

our sweet secret love is so fulfilling

our passionate feelings joyfully sing

 

You are as magnetic as the twinkling stars

as we float on the silken waters in the night

entranced by your gentle voice so romantic

I treasure our secret love that feels so right

 

 

Author notes

The course of true love never did run smooth.
William Shakespeare Best? we were meant to be, all will see...

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  • Kiddy
    April 20

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    Mind-blowing!!!

    Title - 9/10
    Theme - 9/10
    Diction - 10/10
    Uncommonness - 10/10
    Ability to follow rules - 10/10

    Total - 48/50

    -Kiddy

  • Bruce silver member
    March 21
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    Very nice! A passionate tribute to love! heart and soul.


  • Dalaney gold member
    March 21

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    very well done. secret love can be inspirational, but usually leads to a bottle of Pepto Bismal Love, Lane


  • LittleMoon silver member
    March 21

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    Gorgeous words that blend so well with the lovely picture. Gentle words of love are always a pleasure to read. Sheila

  • SimplySonnets gold member
    March 20
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    A lovely heart inspiring poem

    Your picture is a delightful voyage into loves perfect dream.

  • A very beautiful and heartfelt composition--
    Well Written & Versed--
    Best of luck in the contest!

  • Papagallo
    March 20

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    Like the swan pic with your poem. Beautiful love words here. If true love does not run smooth, think of the other. Thanks for sharing and may you do well in the contest.


  • arafura gold member
    March 19
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    Lovely! Beautifully written.

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