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Pride

There was a time I would've died for you, but that wasn't enough
And all I did was cry for you when you stole all of my love

You left without another glance to see what you destroyed
But when you did you took my heart and left an empty void

Now it seems you're missing me, and somehow I still care
But that doesn't mean I'll fall again when you were never there

So I'm picking up my head again and standing up to say
You should've fought for me back then, now it's just too late

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  • saretyuiop
    March 23, 2009

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    Wow, beautiful write. They're missing out on a lot by letting you go, you're one heck of a chick girl.

  • wants2hopes2dreams
    March 22, 2009
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    sums up exactly how i feel.
    so simple and straight to the point.

  • diamondp
    March 19, 2009
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    love it