beneath his father's wings,
the world can't harm him--
he is unbreakable, invincible,
insurmountable.
he looks up at his elder and says:
"we are together, and together harm is impossible"
they stand there;
bold with confidence.
--- and to them it doesn't matter
that they don't exist.
A contest entry
- Quickie!!!! :D by T.o.r.t.u.r.e..
550 points, ended March 19, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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well-deserved gold.
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this is amazing. seriously i loooove the ending!
i can change my title if you'd like.. yours fits better with the poem.
but wow. the ending is so powerful!
goodluck in the contest -
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hahaha.. nah its ok...
this prompt was so dificult. -
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ah i know.
but you did an amazing job on it.
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thank you
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wonderful
twist at the end with them not existing...and yet they are so real to themselves, lovely write, good luck to you as well!
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awesome take on the prompt. i really was not sure what was gonna havppen with it. cause it was an odd picture. i love the poem you wrote over t. good job and good luck in the contest
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it was a great picture, it got great poems...
and thanks for the gold !
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