charcoal highlights
smudge the canvas,
creating clouds
that block out all light.
standing tall, magnificently
protecting its miniature version.
airbrushed wings, drawn in detail
give it a rather unearthly look
that griffins would be jealous of.
feel the rocks shifting;
gazing upon the horizon
the wolf stands tall.
Author notes
http://aragornbird.deviantart.com/art/Winged-Wolves-17699840
oh man. this was SO hard for me.
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A contest entry
- Quickie!!!! :D by T.o.r.t.u.r.e..
550 points, ended March 19, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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charcoal highlights
smudging the canvas,
creating clouds
that block out all light.
that's not a sentence :|
it could be
charcoal highlights
smudge the canvas,
creating clouds
that block out all light.
oh well i guess it's alright cause it's poetry. sry that just kinda threw me off and u asked me to be more critical sry if it comes off mean
airbrushed wings, drawn in detail
give it a rather unearthly look
that griffons would be jealous of.
i love that image! a griffon is a dog though :S griffin is what you were looking for i think. although griffon kind of evolved into meaning griffin too.
i rant a lot. sry.
this is beautiful. -
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woahhh what kind of dog is it?
lol i had no idea.
what a weird coincidence that the picture prompt was of a wolf :\
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I like the first two lines and 'airbrushed.' I wish it was less of a description of the picture, but overall, it's very good. Nice imagery and wording.
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blah i don't like this write much.. i had no idea what to do with the picture when i saw it so i just described it, which is pretty lame i know.
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"charcoal highlights
smudging the canvas,
creating clouds
that block out all light."
Well deserved bronze, the descriptions in this are fabulistic!
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great job.. it was difficult for me to write too but she really likes wolves so I tried, haha.
love your take on the prompt. -
ha... ya this was very had i thought.
good job, we have the same title. but ill change mine. -
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oh wow really?
i didn't even look at your entry haha..
great minds think alike
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i like to challenge. and i like your poem. its very different from all the other.... 3 anyways lol XD. great write. good luck too
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thanks for the bronze hun <3
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good job
the wolf stands tall, such a strong ending, loved it!
great job for this prompt!
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