The moment was beauty.
The moment was bliss.
Not one word uttered
Because every word was
Worthless in the beauty of the moment.
Everything was right in that moment.
The quietness was not a
Scared quietness where they were
Scared to speak.
It couldn't even be considered
A contented quietness.
Though they were quite contented,
That doesn't describe the
Hushed stillness they experienced
It was an awed quietness .
The fact that the moment was just
So perfect.
They were in awe.
They were enveloped in the beauty,
In the awe,
In the peace.
They still are because a
Moment like that doesn't
Dissapear. It goes into hiding.
It will wait for another
Perfect day to peek out again;
It will wait to make them speechless again.
Author notes
Spring has shown its face and that made me happy.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful
This has been a real joy to read. So much emotion and inspiration is displayed through the most simple yet strong words. Poems like this makes one realize that they live for the little moments in life where that ultimate joy is achieved. And the way you ended it leaves me as the reader longing for that perfect day to come again. Hopefully when that day comes you bless the world with another masterpiece like this. Great poem keep up the good work. -
MMMM SPRING!!!!!
Good poem! And uhm, I'm mad at you for never coming by! Jerk, jk you know I love you like a sister. -Liz
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