you want love?
i'll give you a bucketload
you want riches
i'll give you the motherload
you want to see the city
i'll show you the world
you'll never know just how much you meant to me
i felt your soul in my heart
when you cry
i cry with you
every night when you're not here
i think of you
when i wake up
your face is the first i see in my mind
i would never hurt you
could i walk away
and not turn around and come back
could i see you hurt
and not try to make you happy
could i see you smile
and not feel warm inside
i'll never go away
that i promise you
Author notes
love is missing someone whenever you're apart, but somehow feeling warm inside because you're close in heart. kay knudson
i love this quote because it's so dead on. when you love someone you'll miss them in your heart like crazy and each day when you dont see them you feel like you're dying inside. but when you're in their hearts you know they think about you and you think about them and you're never too far apart.
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Comments
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so very true about your note and the quote. loved your work, displayed such dedication and commitment to the one you love. expressed deep felt emotions and endearment. thanks for entering and good luck.
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Nice sentiments....loved it...
Title - 8/10
Theme - 9/10
Diction - 7/10
Uncommonness - 8/10
Ability to follow rules - 10/10
Total - 42/50
-Kiddy
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Love it.
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