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A fake rose.

I give you a dozen roses one being fake,
And I will love you until that last rose dies.
When the sun rises and sets I will be yours.
Until the day we leave earth,
My arms will be yours.
Forever and always together I say.
Never apart I am here to stay.

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  • TheQueenOfPoetry
    October 30
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    This is very deep and full of many emotions. Thanks for sharing.

  • TheQueenOfPoetry
    April 27
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    Very deep. The beginning was very complex. And deep in meaning.


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    April 6

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    thank you for sharing this write with me today and i wish you the best of luck in this contest that we both have entered. viyanna rosemarie


  • Reanna Eryn
    April 6
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    Lovely, breathtaking.


  • Kathraina silver member
    March 30

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    Oh wow, this took my breath away.
    This is such a lovely piece with very tender words.
    Bravo!!!


    ♥ Kate

  • HollyLouise
    March 26

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    Aww its cute. Reading it i remembered beauty and the beast, where there is the rose and he has until the last petal falls from it to fall in love, or he will stay a beast forever.

    "When the sun rises and sets I will be yours.
    Until the day we leave earth,
    My arms will be yours."
    My favourite lines.

    Holly.


  • Gothic Star
    March 23

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    That is a really sweet poem. I like the idea of a fake rose being linked with love and how it will always survive. Loved it.

  • Sparow
    March 20
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    awwwwww so sweetttttttt.......i think its very good.....hope you get a prize..good luck


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    March 20

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    lovely piece, thank you for this entry, good luck in this contest, keep up the love and impressionable poetry...MM


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    March 20

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    Awww, so sweet! I love the first two lines. It's so pretty! Your an awsome poet too my friend! And i'm not sucking up either (:


  • marythepumpkin
    March 20
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    oh awesome poem!!! very emotional. im impressed


  • The FaeQueen
    March 19
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    Ohhh! how sweet!
    wonderful play of words!
    Good luck!

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