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Remember Those Days

Your my beautiful angel sent from heaven and I couldn't ask for anymore than what you give me now,
When times got dark,
We held onto each other so tight and stood up so strong on our weakest knees,
We would hold onto each others hands and feel the warmth of each other,Remember those days?

I remember your sweet smile and the smell of your body after you took a shower,
Look back at the times we spent together and all the happy memories we are building,
The nights we would hold each other so tight and wish it would never end.
When I was down,
You were always there to lift me back up,
Remember those days?
The days of sacrifice and the love we shared?
When the world stood still and no one could see us it seemed?
Remember those days?

When times got hard,
I remember you holding me in your arms and telling em that everything was going to be okay,
Remember those times,
The kisses and the love we shared.

I remember the times my borderline personality disorder would get somewhat out of control and I would try so hard not to take it out on you,
Sometimes I remember those times and it hurts to think I may have hurt you and even when I made you cry,
makes me wonder if I'm a bad person?

But now I look back and just giggle a bit and some more,
Just thinking about all the good times we shared,
Remember those days?
The kisses and the love we shared,
Remember those days?

Now this seems like the perfect words to this song,
The kisses and the love we shared,
Remember those days?
The dreams we shared, the tears we shared and the laughter we shared,
Remember those days?
This is just a little song I wrote you to show you the love I feel for you.

Author notes

It is a song and a poem at the same time. It can go either way.

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  • SiC
    October 5

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    great poem/song, really felt the emotions. good luck in contest.


  • Darkwell
    March 30

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    sweet emotions and difficult truths make up some of the most powerful songs when you write something to someone and not just to write it theres a edge you get in the giving of it from your heart and this song really takes that edge up high lovely

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