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Come Sing Along

Come sing a song
come join along
sing with me
sing to thee

my heart is crying
my soul is dying
my tears are flying
my world is lying

come sing along
come join along
sing with me
sing of a love to be

my eyes are tears
my whispers are fears
my world has no cares
my mouth drinks to much beers

come sing along
come join along
sing with me
sing of a love to be

my head will not sleep
my mind is a creep
my love is so deep
my tears I weep

come sing along
come join along
sing with me
sing of a love to be

my eyes does plea
my heart cries to me
my soul wants free
my life needs thee

come sing along
come join along
sing with me
sing of a love to be

my eyes will cry
my mind ask why
my love had to die
my soul wants fly


come sing along
come join along
sing with me
sing of a love to be

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  • Darkwell
    March 30
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    ok this one made me giggle alot especiually when i got to

    my eyes are tears
    my whispers are fears
    my world has no cares
    my mouth drinks to much beers



    you got some tense issues but overall this had me tapping my foot and singing along

  • tight

    i love it. interesting piece i absolutely loved
    "my eyes will cry
    my mind ask why
    my love had to die
    my soul wants to fly"
    that part was amazing