Come sing a song
come join along
sing with me
sing to thee
my heart is crying
my soul is dying
my tears are flying
my world is lying
come sing along
come join along
sing with me
sing of a love to be
my eyes are tears
my whispers are fears
my world has no cares
my mouth drinks to much beers
come sing along
come join along
sing with me
sing of a love to be
my head will not sleep
my mind is a creep
my love is so deep
my tears I weep
come sing along
come join along
sing with me
sing of a love to be
my eyes does plea
my heart cries to me
my soul wants free
my life needs thee
come sing along
come join along
sing with me
sing of a love to be
my eyes will cry
my mind ask why
my love had to die
my soul wants fly
come sing along
come join along
sing with me
sing of a love to be
A contest entry
- You like Songs? by Darkwell.
1700 points, ended April 10, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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ok this one made me giggle alot especiually when i got to
my eyes are tears
my whispers are fears
my world has no cares
my mouth drinks to much beers
you got some tense issues but overall this had me tapping my foot and singing along


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tight
i love it. interesting piece i absolutely loved
"my eyes will cry
my mind ask why
my love had to die
my soul wants to fly"
that part was amazing



