Verse 1
we could have gone so far
but we never left the start
we could have done so much
i miss your touch
Verse 2
and i cant let go of that day
as i watched you walk away
and now all that i have left
this emptiness
Chorus
i see whats gone
and where it all went wrong
i know what i lost and whats the cost
i wish you were here
its hard i close my eyes
and there's your face
Author notes
Inspired by Run
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Comments
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Very Beautiful...It seems peaceful, but still has that longing touch. I adore this.
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Potential..
On the chorus find a rhyming word for cost.
Beside's that it's good. -
excellent start
love the flow ,this is one you can hear the music
and feel it all the way through
very smooth, soft touch
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Sweet
I can understand how it feels when we loose love , although i had never experienced it .Its a nice piece of work to read . well done uncle mike.
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