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our first time

my cell phone rings
i looked down at the screen
a smile spreads across my face
its my baby

i anwer hi corazon!
he says hey mi amor
ive been tinking, i know we have been together
for a couple months now so when can i make you mine?

what? okay so when?
he says my place tonight
candle light diiner sounds good?
and i was thinking you for dessert

i laugh at him
tell him i will be there
my heart racing a thousand miles a minute
god have i longed to know what he feels like

i got there nerves with anticipation.
the dinner was amazing
he looked and smelled wonderfull
he said ready to go to my room?

we entered the room
he smiled put on some music
said mami hoy va ser mi!
he kissed me softly

then the kisses became more deep and passionate
i pulled his shirt over his head
as he removed mine
god was he beautiful

he layed me on the bed
my heart racing i could swear he could hear it
he just smiled and said corazon relax
im goin to make love to you like no one else

his kisses started to trail off on to my neck
then down my neck, he paused at my collar bone
i moaned, he kept kissing until he reached my breast
i took in a deep breath when he licked my breast

he palyed with my nipples with his tongue
then he mved down to my stomach still kissing
he said are you ready, tonights not about me its about you
with the nod of my head he removed my jeans and underware.

he kissed me right on my pussy
then he seperrated my legs
and began to lick my clit
i moaned of god how his tongue felt good

he licked slowly, then he licked fast
i arched my back and grabbed onto the bed sheets
i moaned and groaned for him not to stop
my body quivered from the pleasure

he stopped and looked me in the eyes
he began to kiss me slowly
then with such passion the kisses where longer and deeper
he removed his pants with me watching

he crawled into the bed and placed himself between my legs
he said mami hoy te voy a dar placer
my heart raced
i told him that i wanted to feel him all of him

when he place himself inside of me
i let out a loud moan
he moved in slow and deep
god how he felt good

for a couple of minutes it was slow and carefull
until i said papi te quiero dame tu
his face lit up , then he said if i hurt you let me know
ive wanted you for so long i dont want to do anything to make you go

i told him stop playin and put it on me
and boy did he ever
he picked up his speed and continued to go in deep
he moaned , i moaned an groaned

told him not to stop, to keep going
our breathing got heavy, dont stop corazon
harder, harder, uh hmm harder
he groaned an moaned and said mami u feel good

i was moaning so loud that he knew i was going to cum
he pounded harder and harder until my body went limp from the pleasure
he said mi amor r u ok?
i said im fine

he kissed me for along time
then when he came up for air
he said i love you
and i said i love you too.

Author notes

i used some spanish
corazon:heart, mi amor:my love,hoy va ser mia:today im going to make u mine,to voy a dar placer: im going to give u pleasure, te quiero dame tu: i love you give me all of u

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  • Wow. I loved it.
    Very sexy and romantic.
    The spanish sent it over the edge.

    Favorite line: I've wanted you for so long I don't want to do anything to make you go.

    That was soooooo sweet


  • dani girl
    May 17
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    wow babe !

    wow babe i tell you what id love to meet this fucking guy he sounds like a one in a milion.

  • so sexy and sensual!!
    i loved the spanish words made it very romantic...
    your first time sounds like how it should be for every girl....


  • MasterFoxFang
    March 30

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    Great

    hello this is the first one i read by you and i like this i must say the imagery is good and the words flow way to go and by the way it's really romantic i love the way you guys did this great write and love candle light dinners awesome keep it coming except for this part

    he kissed me for along time
    then when he came up for air
    that's the only thing it can be re worded and made better keep it up

  • really great write;; i still remember my first time but it wasn't nething like this;; but still pleasurable;;


  • shykeviona
    March 20
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    I LOVE IT

    IT WAS REALLY GOOD. I HOPE IT WAS GOOD!

  • i love it.. i sounded so real
    great poem i especially love the spanish

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