Each day passes and I’m in regret
I loved and gave up The one Ill never forget
Through the damage and sorrow there you are
But through your lies, your way to far
Trust me you said time and again
Where the lies started, I cant even begin
Each day I’ll look back and know I had love
And Ill know with each lie I was shoved
Crossing the line between friend and foe
A path only you can decided to own
My ladies man in disguise
Where was the truth, and what was a lie
What to believe and what is real
The pain I will forever feel
Our love is sour no bitter sweet
So once again I’ll hide and retreat
The best of both worlds to you and another love
I hope you see my love no one can go above
Author notes
BTW Bullet for my valentine is a kick ass band-absolutely love their poison CD
Good tatse XD
A contest entry
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Comments
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WOW!! I have felt this same way... I hate liars and cheaters... Thats what gets me the most.... people lying about the stupidest things... if only they knew.... you did a great job and seems as though he took your love for granted.. keep up the great owrk and good luck in my contest!
Shannon*Leah
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He defiantely did
and it was over the stupidest thing as well
all for his exs
I hated that more than anything
It was one of the most painful things I could have been put through
due to me deciding to let my gaurd down for once
thanks hun
i wish myslef luck too lol
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wow
Im amazed- I can imagine Bullet for my Valentine singing this. such strong words and sad imagery.. every line is a tormented gasp of dedication to tears. Thankyou for sharing!
Love RareFlower
p.s thanks for the compliment!

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great work






