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The one who loves you is the one who will make you weep

Each day passes and I’m in regret
I loved and gave up The one Ill never forget
Through the damage and sorrow there you are
But through your lies, your way to far

Trust me you said time and again
Where the lies started, I cant even begin

Each day I’ll look back and know I had love
And Ill know with each lie I was shoved

Crossing the line between friend and foe
A path only you can decided to own

My ladies man in disguise
Where was the truth, and what was a lie

What to believe and what is real
The pain I will forever feel

Our love is sour no bitter sweet
So once again I’ll hide and retreat

The best of both worlds to you and another love
I hope you see my love no one can go above

Author notes

BTW Bullet for my valentine is a kick ass band-absolutely love their poison CD

 

Good tatse XD

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  • Shannon62875
    March 30

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    WOW!! I have felt this same way... I hate liars and cheaters... Thats what gets me the most.... people lying about the stupidest things... if only they knew.... you did a great job and seems as though he took your love for granted.. keep up the great owrk and good luck in my contest!

    Shannon*Leah

    • He defiantely did
      and it was over the stupidest thing as well

      all for his exs

      I hated that more than anything
      It was one of the most painful things I could have been put through
      due to me deciding to let my gaurd down for once

      thanks hun
      i wish myslef luck too lol


  • RareFlower
    March 25

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    wow

    Im amazed- I can imagine Bullet for my Valentine singing this. such strong words and sad imagery.. every line is a tormented gasp of dedication to tears. Thankyou for sharing!
    Love RareFlower
    p.s thanks for the compliment!


  • kryz
    March 19
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    great work