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As The Fire Fells My Lungs

morning starts in the dark

getting up a grab my drink

three smokes and a lighter

leaving my home behind

to leave those voices behind

wind blowing strong as i turn from it

lighting my cigarette

letting it fell me

the visions start again

...

...

the day i met her

her lips pressed to mine

holding so tight

till the night

...

as i fell my body slow in that cold water

skin fells like ice

i wont make it

brother

breath

...

all alone

hear in the darkness

rocking myself sane

as the door opens

all of the ones who care

all of those worried faces

...

i am dead i am gone

i've lost so much

but some how

i'm still hear

...

i flick my cigarette

as i continue to walk

the world slowly fades

and as i leave my pain behind

all those who care

and even those you just know

i pull out my lighter turning to the wind

looking back

as fire fells my lungs

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just for the contest we all have those days of memorial

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  • hisaddiction
    April 14
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    Amazing! Great job!

  • ...
    Thanks for writing this for my contest.

    I think that this is good, great actually. I really like the entire write.

    Thanks for entering.