Before our thoughts were as they are,
Before every dream became a scar
Before I would allow such treachery
Before you caused me misery
Between the lies and rancid air
Between the banter we would share
Between the fear of lonely dying
Between the words of men denying
Beyond the stars and wretched earth
Beyond the contention of its birth
Beyond the night and beyond the day
Beyond the bother of saving you.
Please tell me what you think
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wow
it's really good. I like it. It's a bit sad and dark but it's awesome. Hope you come out with more great one soon.
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thanks! its like the first thing i tried to write in months and months, and rhymes!
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wow i really love this poem for some reason... i like the mood that is set and i agree with what you're saying. well done my friend
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