Your hands feel like no one else’s
Warm and gentle forces stimulating my private skin
The moist pinkness, ripeness your lips offer,
And how your tongue feels as it parts open the doors to my opulent orifice…
The taste of your skin, salty with perspiration,
Mingling with the desire that seeps out of
Each
And
Every
Pore
Of our bodies.
Joined at the hips.
OH! The motion of your hips, to have your pressure inside me and
How I love…
Oh how I love the feeling of your weight on top of me
Like a piece to a puzzle we fit- completion!
And watching your face, hearing your sounds as you give into ecstasy,
While weaving my wandering fingers through your hair
..is like no one else’s
And your skin smells as softness should
When I breathe you in..
But I cannot breathe with you
If I exhale, will I blow you away?
It’s the risk I take
So you can make me feel like someone else;
Brand new and shiny and bright
And it feels like no one else
And all I want
Your love feels like no one else’s.
Comments
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Wonderful erotic piece this is . I love "opulent orifice…" and my favorite line is : "While weaving my wandering fingers through your hair" though there is so much in this poem I really like- I could quote the whole thing when telling which parts I like most. My only con crit- I would do away with the line : "Joined at the hips" because its kind of cliche and doesn't really fit with the rest of the poem. But that's just me. This is a great piece and I really enjoyed it.
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Wow, this piece is excellent. Great imagery. The description of emotions and feelings in this piece is amazing. Great write. - cgirl0410
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FAWESOME!!!!
I like it!!!!
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