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He Killed Himself for What He Did To Her

He hates what he has done.
He broke the love of his life’s heart.
He had no purpose for what he has done.
He though he was doing right. But he actually wasn’t
He killed her on the inside.
Not thinking what he was hurting her.
She is gone now and it is all his fault.
Why was he so stupid?
So dumb not to talk things over with her?
He can’t fix it anymore.
She killed herself because of him.
He feels horrible.
Someone who loved him has ended their life for him.
He knew she loved him.
But he didn’t love her back.
He did the final thing to her heart and she couldn’t bare anymore pain.
She had once told him that he was the only one in her life for him.
But he didn’t believe her.
Deep down in his heart he truly loved her.
He broke his promise to her and now he feels empty with her gone.
He wants to kill himself to be with her but then he’d be breaking another promise to her.
He can never forgive him self for what he has done.
He locked himself in his room and starved himself to death.
He was never seen from again.
He killed her and now he killed himself.

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