its cold
its dark
the beacon of your light
I'll go home
and just get stoned
would you like to see it more?
the fading of lives?
we all get old
not fresh
not new
just sober
and pale
would like to see it more?
the fading of our lives?
all comfort in the old
raced by with all the new
death must be
the next act we will see
would you like to see it more?
the fading of our lives?
Author notes
suck it if you dont like my grammar or my failure to USE CAPITALS.
A contest entry
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700 points, ended March 23, 2009, 71 entries
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Comments
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I freaking love this!!
It reminds me of Nirvana, but more put together.
:-)
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haha nice AN, lucky me i don't have to suck anything. i like it, a lot of truth in the lyrics. thanks for entering
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