im breakin down
im crackin up
im falling apart at the seams.
you broke the stone that enclosed my heart
but now its forming again.
you snapped my heart in half
and threw the peices on the ground.
and now things just seems to be spinning
out of control.
im getting dizzy
im shaking uncontrollably
and all i can do is stare
at the broken shattered pieces on the ground
and wonder...
if you die of a broken heart,
is the person who broke it considered a
murderer?
What did you think
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interesting concept. me like.
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Interesting write and concept.
I believe that every time someone suffers a broken heart they feel they die inside. As reality serves it though only your life and love with that person dies...so your grieving the relationships death.
I really like this one.
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Hmmmmm, interesting thought... now I am wondering that thing myself. I sometimes feel as if I am dying of a broken heart, but that is because the one that broke mine, has passed on, he shattered it the day he drew that last breath......*sigh*
Great job!
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