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All the Things You Said..

I love you
I need you
I care for you
I'll never leave you
You're mine
And I'm yours
We'll be together
Forever more
Without you
There is no me
I knew from day one
We were meant to be
I'll always be here
Next to you
I swear to god
My word is true
I want to spend
Our lives together
I want this love
To last forever
I'll never ever
Leave your side
I trusted you
But..you lied
You tore my heart
Bit by bit
You never really
Gave a shit
You left me alone
To bleed and scream
You made nightmares
Of all my dreams
Now you're gone
I'm cold and dead
Its because of all
The things you said..

Author notes

I just wrote this..i had alot on my mind so..yeah.
Idk if it sucks or not :/

Eh....

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Comments

  • It does not suck I Like it.

    Grr>.<


  • Ami
    April 6

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    I like this one alot kinda reminds me of my ex :/
    Really good write "I trusted you
    But..you lied
    You tore my heart
    Bit by bit
    You never really
    Gave a shit
    You left me alone
    To bleed and scream
    You made nightmares
    Of all my dreams
    Now you're gone
    I'm cold and dead
    Its because of all
    The things you said.."
    Really good


  • glitterydoom
    March 24
    Edit | Reply
    I agree with Megz"... rawr..? V.V"
    but it doesnt suck

    I loves it

  • ..... rawr..? v.v