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I Know It’s Time For You To Say Goodbye

Tears fill-up your eyes you’re about to cry
The time has come for you to kiss me goodbye.
I know you’ll miss me more than I’ll ever know
It’s your career so I won’t stop you, you got to go.
You will be in my thoughts and in my heart
The same will be with you when you’re apart.
But I won’t miss you that much sweetheart
‘cause your tattoo will be right here on my butt.

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By: Shuberth Dias
Email: shuberth@rediffmail.com

Author notes

What were you thinking ? You had any clue this poem will end like this ?
Well I don’t wear a tattoo, it just came in my poetic mind lol
WRITTEN: WEDNESDAY, DECEMBER 24, 2008

Katie if your reading I hope you know you read this before, thanks for the comment on my blog

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  • mcope8050
    June 28
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    yeah,,, her memories won't fade like others do,,, for sure,,,

    nicely done,,, the ryhme was well done,,, and the thoughts? touching,,, nice write and a good read,,, thanks for sharing

  • musiccraze2009
    April 8

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    ha! I loved it! This is true love...to be able to let someone go but keep them forever in a truely personal way. great write!


  • Selestial
    April 1
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    Haha that was very cute and totally unexpected! Very nice!


  • DramaQueen469 gold member
    March 31
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    LMAO last line made me giggle. Well done my friend!

    Maria


  • lyricist
    March 30
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    this is a cool poem especially the ending. that is hilarious. too funny


  • jazzy4eva
    March 24
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    LMAO

    lmao i didnt expect the end it was very sudden and made me laugh lol ly xxx


  • DecorusApparatus
    March 20

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    Ahaha I thought this sounded familiar!!

    Yes, brilliant as usual Shuberth. You never fail to put a smile on my face XD

    Keep up the amazing writing!!

    --Katie ♥♥


  • Glenn
    March 20

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    i guess this poem is farewell to someone

    This poem sounds amazing........with good rhyme too

    IT SEEMS LIKE U GONNA MISS SOMEONE. So sad that this happens
    EVEN THOUGH ITS A SAD KIND OF A POEM IT SOUNDED FUNNY ATT THE END, and it made me smile. Nice flow, and what seems like a reasonable request.

    ANY WAY NICE SHORT AND SWEET SAD POEM.

    soft and warm are perfect words for this poem. Wonderful stuff. KEEP IT UP BRO

    , &
    GLENN




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