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the Blood

THE BLOOD IS BACK,
         
              I AM HAVING ANOTHER NACK,
                         
                              THE BLADE IS CLUTCHED IN MY FIST,
                                       
                                          FOR SOME REASON I AM ALWAYS PISSED
                                                   
                                                      PARANOIA IS ALL I GOT LEFT,
                                                           
                                                                WHEN THE BLADE SLITS MY WRIST
                                                                         
                                                                            TAKING BLOOD IS THEFT.

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  • XxShOoTiNgStArxX
    June 11

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    Short But Beautiful deep write, full of emotion..

    "FOR SOME REASON I AM ALWAYS PISSED" this is how I feel alot, And I cant seem to find out why.
    Good write, Look forward to reading more..


  • StarEyes
    March 18
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    Hmmmm, leaves one thinking that for sure. I really like the depth of your words in this one!

  • lost.and.alone
    March 18
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    Quite a good write. x