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For A Girl

I stand here in front of you with my arms wide open.
Waiting for a sign to go forward and sweep you off your feet.
I stay up all night concocting a plan to finally tell you how I really feel but
if only things would be so easy as to just show you what my heart has to say, you would surely be obliged to stay.
I concentrate all the love I have for you and make the sun burn with a passion.
One day soon you will look to the stars and see your name outstretched on a blanket of space.
"I love you, I love you" is one the few phrases I actually know, or actually the only words I really know.
So here I say, "I love you" and take your breath away as you have done so in the past.
So here I am with my hands over my heart that has been yours from the very start.
So here I am, so here I am, so here I am!
I'll build you the perfect world where we could be free to do as we please.
I'll drain the oceans in search for a pearl as perfect as your skin.
I'll crush all mountains in search of a diamond as adamant as your spirit.
I'll put out all the fires of hate and allow only love to conquer all.
I'll create for you a star,a planet,a galaxy,a universe,just to name it after you.
I'll make you the happiest person on earth if you say yes.
With me you can escape reality and be happy.
I can treat you like the queen you are, like the godess everyone worships, I can treat you with all the love and respect anyone can give.
So I want you to see that you and I are meant to be!

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  • jamesbliss
    March 22

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    Wow. A-M-A-Z-I-N-G. I like the format, it's almost like regular writing, btu tiwht that poetic touch to it. Excellent.