and so the world cries,
cries out it's broken hearts,
it's scarred memories,
and broken dreams.
searching,
looking,
but never finding.
uncontrolled fears,
never-ending tears.
drinking to cope,
cutting, to feel the pain,
smiling to hide the truth.
[ let.it.rain. ]
Author notes
I was at school and it just so happened to be pouring down rain. I sat outside and watched the rain..and it gave me this idea..the world is crying I thought..crying out in agonizing pain. It continued to rain through out the day, I felt quite sorrow for the world.
Everyone...every single person in the world has problems, problems no one else may know about...
remember that the next time you decide to judge someone.
Please...be honest.
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And it
does!
Rain can bring the tears out of our hearts like this can't it? Pouring your thoughts out in a write is therapeutic & important. This is something all can identify with & understand. Good going here Nikki! 
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This is just beautiful...
cries out it's broken hearts,
it's scarred memories,
and broken dreams.
I relat my heart to the sorrowful world that is hurting...You gave this poem so much life. It poured out honesty and raw beauty...thank you for sharing...luv cookie -
oops forgot the clappy!
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very true...
the world is so full of tragedy. I don't think that any of us escapes our own personal tragedy. not one of us. this is why having faith and believing in something that goes beyond and rises above all of this is important. We seem to live in such an endless sea of suffering; and we are all drowning. Believe me, I know what you are feeling here. You expressed it very well. nice writing... -
funny thing....i think the same,your gonna be alright nick nack pattywack wait till your full grown,lol
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i agree
this is good
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true little one.
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Wondrous
What a profound insight you have for one so young I am truly amazed by your thoughts. I think your faith has shaped who you are as a young lady I for one am pleased to see you hold such conviction in our Lord your thoughts and prayer are beautiful. God Bless you.
Lady E
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Profoundly True!!!!
Great job describing rain...the world is crying, how fitting that is..sadness and sorrow is everywhere you turn, but Jesus is the light of the world to heal that sorrow and bring light back into our lives and hearts but still, this is a great way to bring the sorrow and sadness into the light for all to see and ponder upon...Great Job Nikki!!!~~~Toni~~~
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this is deep. So much said in this, and your explanation in your authors notes is so true. Everyone is hurting in this world, and it does no good to judge others when they might be hurting just as much as you. Awesome write girly.
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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very good
and oh so true. So many people, me included, walk around with a private world of hurts, tears, and pains inside that we hide from everyone else. I try to be kind to everyone because I dont know if an unkind deed from me may be the last straw to break someone. Good job sweetie, Mark
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Great piece
The rain tends to be really good about getting our muse to work.
Your emotions were strong and well penned
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