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I Love You

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There is a beauty in your face
Filled with peacefulness and grace
Overrun with complete eloquence
I am completely in utter suspense

Whenever I look into your sparky eyes
I see all the beautiful colours of the sky
Whenever I smell the lovely  fresh air
I get the feeling with me you are there

I wish I could be with you day and night
I would be your princess and you my knight
I Love You with all my pure soul and heart
Although  even if we are  two worlds apart

Your the one that makes me always smile
You just seem to make my life worthwhile
To me you are the only man for me
And you are the one that makes me free

















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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    July 30

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    This is excellent con gratulations on your silver trophy. Love is excellent longs you have the right one Thank you for sharing and it was very much a pleasure to read


  • jpebbles39
    May 28

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    This was an awesome read.. I feel your emotions penetrating through my thoughts when I read this... You express yourself with so much feeling in your words..


    • ScottishPrincess silver member
      May 28

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      Thank you for the comment much appreciatedI love this man with everything that I am...I just write from within.


  • spiritraven
    May 18
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    Great

    I love this. Very nicely written thank you so much for entering my contest and good luck


  • Beautiful Sin-
    April 27
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    I love Cena! Ha
    Great write! Keep it up!


  • rinzurajan
    April 6
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    wow...did he read this...this was so pure...

    good luck in the contest...


  • Amandainlove
    March 21
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    I like this
    Good luck.


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    March 18

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    This is a sweet love poem Hazel! Very sweet...just like you! Pam

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