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Nat-u-ral L.O.V.E.

I sit here reminiscent of...d ever fluent.
LOVE
What is it?
Four distinct letters put together like the word of god
But I sit here
BOMBARDED
Discredited for my attempts of it
Shredded and torn apart by it
Yet
As I think about those fours distinct letters...intertwining one wit d other...
Oooo...I pick up an adrenaline rush...causes me to shiver
Feel like I caught d highest fever
Cuz

My body's temperature...
It rises
Rises like the highest tides of d oceans
My body...unable to display this emotion
I'm overwhelmed
Seems as  though I've entered another realm
LOVE...supernatural, metaphysical...
How do u define it cuz it’s far from Nat-u-ral
Nat-u-ral are my abilities, my insecurities
Yet with love it fulfills all my needs

Nat-u-ral...3 distinct syllables
L.O.V.E...four distinct letters
Put together like the fine arts...
If anything, any letter, any syllable is taken apart…
What would be left?
NOTHIN

Nat-u-ral L.O.V.E
Two words symbiotic of each other
Symbiotic...like u and I
I an u…My dear
That’s Nat-u-ral L.O.V.E

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