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Skin

Walking on eggshells, paper thin,
    Painted with traces of ivory skin.
The tender hearted dare to step
Over the footfalls that have been made-
These liars paths were spun from heartstrings...
And with tracks of tears were laid.

And when you leave, leave for me your silhouette;
Paint it on the wall so I'll not soon forget.
    Although the feel of your skin can never be replaced,
Perhaps a final memory can leave me at peace.

These paper-thin hearts ignited with sparks,
    And ablaze, set our skin with a glow-
In our love, we could never be made to believe
That betrayal might loom underneath that glowing shroud-
    That skin would tear so easily.
We could be made to see, were we not so proud.

Our hearts were not stone, only clay,
To be molded into what we thought we wanted;
    Fingerprints ingrained, from flesh to soul, skin on skin-
Like the sweetest wine, we were left wanting more,
Praying each time that the aftertaste would not be so bitter.

The knowledge of good and evil was never good enough,
Not when you were left knowing there was far more to learn.
So you will keep welcoming the pain, hoping that someday
    Your skin will heal

And all the scars will fade-
    All your hopes will have been made-
          All your promises fulfilled-
              All the liars tongues will still-
                That your clay heart will feel-
And all your skin shall heal.

Author notes

Don't let love blind you. Often, it hurts your heart more to believe lies and then walk away with them.

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  • libel -
    March 21
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    ap name spaced out in an, pleaase :]


  • libel -
    March 19

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    Amazing job
    Truly.
    The imagery and metaphor you've used in this piece is fantastic. Perhaps my favorite is the first stanza - beautiful words, almost heartbreaking.

    My only critique here would be that at times, the pattern of thought in this piece is a little hard to follow-I found myself getting a little lost in the ideas you have here, as there's not really any breaks in the continuation of thought.

    Overall, fantastic job!
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