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Battlefield

I'm in command
The general
Of a loosing team
Unfit for victory
Always loosing the same way
Nothing to fight against
Our cradle with fall
And we will come tumbling
Winners and all
Bullets slice through air
Soldiers fall
Nothing left to do
We no longer stall
Blood shed
Dried up tears
We've been on this battlefield
For years and years
Out of bullets
No more ammo
Out kingdoms falling
Beware soldiers in camo
When were done
Its me and you
On this battlefield
We once knew
Nothing but tears and pain
So its here an this battlefield
We will always remain

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  • crazy eyes
    May 27
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    I like it sis its pretty good