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I Am Panther

 

 

 

born under a dark velvet sky,
the moon yet to rise

but soon he will become
my master

my destiny to wander
to hunt, to feed
at night


invisible in shadows
camouflage is all

built for the chase,
the kill


do not fear me ...



I am

panther

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt is the picture on contest page.

QUITE SIMPLE REALLY

#1 LOOK AT THE PIC ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^


#2 BE INSPIRED...........

#3 BE AMAZING..........

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  • dutch2lips gold member
    March 27
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    great write, congrats on gold!


  • tarcus
    March 25
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    nailed it


  • deercatcher
    March 21

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    The experts all maintain there is no melanistic phase for the cougar. Yet, people tell me they see black panthers. The experts say there aren't cougars around. But I saw one on the way to less than a mile from my children's school. My son saw one at 15, with me in the truck. He thought it was a bobocat. But looked at a pic of a cougar, and said, that's it... The neighbor 250 meters through the wood saw one on the bank of his pond, when all his yard birds went nuts. And this winter, (drum roll) they shot one in the middle of the town across the river. Tests showed it not an escaped pet...
    http://www.kpxj21.com/news/Residents-of-Bossier-City-spot-a-cougar-20857/#

  • Bad Bill
    March 19
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    Tone, imagery and impact are all spot on - excellent.

    Best of luck,
    Bill


  • hawkeslake gold member
    March 19

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    Oh, another wonderful poem, and perfect for the prompt. Always so precise in your word choices, lovely images. Makes me want to be a panther myself. Lita


  • arafura gold member
    March 18
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    Excellent. Wonderful imagery!


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    March 18

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    Oh Sue your words are absolutely amazing in this piece!!!! This is so very very well portrayed!!!!!! Your details and descriptions are truly perfect!!!!! I love the way that this is written!!!!! You did a truly magnificent and outstanding job with this write!!!!!!! What a beautiful piece!!!!!!


  • csmmoms2
    March 18
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    Lovely

    I should have known that I'd get dragged to the jungle where
    beasties hunger for flesh. -c

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