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To Be Named

Closed eyes,
Our lips collide.
Time stops as we kiss.
I'm yours,
And you're mine.
It can't get any better than this.
The world is crashing,
But we are on top.
I'm falling for you,
And I just can't stop.
You will never have to hear the words,
"I'm breaking away."
I'm always going to be getting closer,
Each and every day.

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  • StarEyes
    March 18

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    This is beautiful! I don't think it needs much else if anything else! I love the feel this has to it! Great job!