I shall forget,
this night and you,
in an imported blur
you will become a foggy, hazy memory,
made to fade
with the coming of dawn.
A contest entry
- Another Quickie by Cerulean Sunrise.
700 points, ended March 18, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like this a lot. The structure really works, and the flow, and the thought process. Good title. A nice write.
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Nice flow here.
an imported blur - says so much -
a beautiful take on the promt good luck in the contest
maralisa
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Simply beautiful. I love the intocated over-tone of this writ. The thoughts of throwing caution to the wind sounds so exciting. A most enjoyable read, and best wishes in the comp
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Wow great take on the prompt!
Takes the form of wine quite well ^.^
Bravo! And best of luck!
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