with a pressing urgency
my feelings matured
from full bodied fantasy
staining my sheets,
to cries of
co-dependant craziness.
A contest entry
- Another Quickie by Cerulean Sunrise.
700 points, ended March 18, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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You have penned a very beautiful writ. I loved the message and the emotional environment. Congrats on a well deserved gold. A most enjoyable read
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Nicely done congrats on gold
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Very well done
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Love that title
well writ. -
Oooh nice take on the prompt, very well written.
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a good piece of poetry which flows smoothly, the craziness of life and love - it is a definite part of existence, to know we are all in the madhouse together.
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a great take on the promt good luck in the contest
maralisa
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