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Woman

Soft and pink,
fodder for the foolish masses.
I bristle at
conformity,
at the notion of me being
that which you perceive
me to be
and nothing more.
Shall I wear glitter
in my hair,
and curtsey like a lady?
Perhaps then
you will look at me
and not through me
not past me,
not to a moment
long gone,
and not yet forgotten,
The moment I became not simply
a silhouette at your side,
but a voice as well.

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I used the prompt I hate ruffles and this was where it took me...

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  • otepsaint
    March 18

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    WONDERFULL!

    Wonderfull.... I love the view... exactly what I wanted with this prompt!
    ***not to a moment
    long gone,
    and not yet forgotten,
    This is a beautiful line... it pulls the piece together!
    GOOD LUCK
    ~Alie~

  • Ah yes to delve multiple dimensions.

    Nice take.