I never measured mine
But whenever we entwine
and it enters her spacious pleasure land
it works miracles and is no less than a magical wand
It grows just the right size,
and her moans tell me she deserves the hard-earned prize.
She plays with me and spreads her ivory legs
and begs
'Oh baby, visit the Lucy's wonderland!
I want it so, don't you understand?'
When it slides into her meadow
even the longest and the thickest ones pale into an insignificant shadow.
If her pleasure is the measure,
mine is the biggest treasure.
A contest entry
- Humorously Speaking. . . by JeannieD Hunter.
700 points, ended March 23, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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it's erotic but not repulsively vulgar. that's not something i've often seen these days. great job.
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awesome write! I loved it! very erotic but sensual! The "hard-earned prize" part was awesome!!! Great write!
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awwww
"If her pleasure is the measure,
mine is the biggest treasure."
they are the cutest lines!!! good job
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You're my hero. You have such awesome writings!
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Wow!!! Love it...especially those last two lines...it's all about the pleasure!
Annie
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My Souls Reflection
Thanks Annie!
I like to give and take pleasure.
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oh god-i LOVE this! it makes me want to get closer to you lols
tehehe
but yeea im LOVING this one it stands out and deserves more than just applause
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Hales
Great comment. Thank you, baby! Thank you very much indeed!
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nice
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deep blue sea
Thanks!
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wow!! this is really good. i like the ryme in it.keep up the good work.
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Nasty18
"What" is really good? Explain.
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Bet mine is bigger than yours lmao. I added you as a fav. I am 18 and would like some favs. You seem to write like me a bit.
Mr. Jigs
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Mr Jigs
I bet it is......and I don't envy you.
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If her pleasure is the measure,
mine is the biggest treasure.
what a tantalizing write
delicious with wit
and a smile of surprise
well done
Hugs Angel♥
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AngelBellerose
Thanks.
I love delicious things and tasty people, sweet lady! -
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wicked grin whoa
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AngelBellerose
As a matter of fact, some people like 'wickedness'.
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whoa!
Enticing piece for sure!
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hisaddiction
I'm happy you liked 'it'.
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This was awsome...great imagery really sensual it just made my day..I think ia amazing
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this is fucking crazyyy
haha i love this
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mmmmm.... I like it.
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Yukiko-of-snow
mmmmm.... want more of 'it', baby?
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Measure it anyway, hun!
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Ms Lez
I need your help, bby, to measure it....lol
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Awesome job! Keep it up!
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Heroesrox
It's usually Up, rarely down.
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BehindTheShadow
I'm hungry......I need lunch. -
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I was on lunch...great write, made me smile...sent me back to work a bit happier, thanks...
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YUMMY!
this is delicious...! erotic in the best form....good luck in the contest with this scrumptious piece!
becca
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Girl-Interrupted
What's delicious, the poem or my ....?
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LOVE THIS!!
See I told you'd do a wonderful job!
"SEEMS innocent with the word choice "Lucy's wonderland", "wand" and so on.. though it's very erotic..
Guess you go for "Size doesn't matter" lol
Good luck in the contest
"yummy"
Nooni
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NooNiThEWitcH
When it comes to action, no one cares for the size. Most girls are content even with the smallest one.
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