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Flow River Flow

Flow river flow
Out of control
This the way to peace and joy
This the way for girl and boy
Tears with fears engulfed by the sea
Lives at last taken seriously
Drops of grace from humility
                  J.R. O'Neill 3/18/09

How is being out of control with crying or laughing a good thing for the soul?

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  • MysticBlue gold member
    March 30
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    Very nice poem hun. I love it.
    Hugs, Marie