May I look, may I see,
may I kiss, pretty please?
It's in Braille but these bumps
on your breasts I can read:
Take your tongue, lick and rub-
Please yourself, girl; please me-
I'm not sure but here goes –
I feel shy…
O, you Rose!
Let me suck what I touch-
all this pink, here's the key-
I'm afraid, what about…
O, my God, you're so free!
Will you go all the way?
Just as far as you say.
Do you love me? OK,
take your time; yes, that way.
No, don't stop!
But you said –
Never mind, we're in bed;
Now I want everything-
So do you, Boy; it's spring…
A contest entry
- Erotica Contest by Reanna Eryn.
475 points, ended March 24, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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WOW! Breathtaking!
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Great job on this piece.
Nice little tale you've woven here.
Bravo
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A lovely spring romp Marcy. And I too, like the phrasing and the two lines that echo:
"Please yourself, girl; please me-" and
"So do you, Boy; it's spring…"
Artfully done!
Paul
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lovely!
i enjoyed this very much, interesting phrasing, and yet it adds to passion withing the words!
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