Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Affair ( Gold )

Missing image

Never kiss on a promise

for lips tell lies,

your sure to be disappointed.

 

Commitment shall never colour,

grey muted

just for fun.

 

Arched spine pleasures beg,

scratching surface

Moaning gasps, lustful.

 

Cold cotton

crisp contrast

frosting on the glass was a heated affair.

 

Author notes

http://laadolf.com/images/sensualitysigned.jpg

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 13 of 13

  • laura0757 gold member
    November 14

    Edit | Reply
    I came by to read your silver poem, but landed on this one...first of all...congratualtions on your trophie, I can see why..great write, and it was a pleasure reading a little bit about you..on your page,,I always find it so interesting to hear about a place in the world I know little about or just to learn something that I did not know before....life would stop in its tracks..if i thought life is not a learning process right to our end...and I find you can get to know a person through words that are written...and I find this facinating. all the best and a pleasure to read.......enjoy your win......


  • Garmond gold member
    July 23
    Edit | Reply
    Phew.... this gave me shivers... you have really managed to soak this with a sense of cold. Affects such as this is pure testament to powerful writing.


  • ajocean silver member
    June 4
    Edit | Reply
    great piece thanks a million for sharing


  • Candyknife gold member
    April 28

    Edit | Reply

    striking

    never disappointed after your reads, the first stanza grabs you as if trying to warn, and the last one, wtness to the aftermath, nicely done


  • storiesuntold gold member
    March 28
    Edit | Reply

    Wow what a read

    You penned this so well honey and keep up the good work


  • daviscth silver member
    March 19

    Edit | Reply
    Your talent grows brighter with each poem you create sis. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing with me.


  • perfectsunset gold member
    March 18
    Edit | Reply
    oops, forgot these!


  • perfectsunset gold member
    March 18

    Edit | Reply
    Wow, sis, you never cease to amaze me.
    This was gorgeously sensual.
    Lovely imagery portrayed and i really
    loved the last stanza.

    Amazing!! & good luck in the contest,
    hope you grab the gold it deserves!

    xx


  • Heroesrox
    March 18

    Edit | Reply
    Awesome job! I really like your take on the prompt and so far...you are the only one who did that exact prompt! Keep up the great work! Best wishes.


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      March 20
      Edit | Reply
      thank you
      Hun I really was unsure where to take this prompt, yet so wanted to write for it too
      I loved the art, and tried to get inside their thoughts and minds
      much love Julie xxx


  • penman gold member
    March 18
    Edit | Reply

    Excellent

    Oh my what great images you painted. So well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Riftkin gold member
    March 18
    Edit | Reply
    Now that has lots of images running through the mind. You did wonderful with this.


  • maralisa silver member
    March 18

    Edit | Reply
    a brillant take on the image promt sis your imagery and depth is wonderful throughout good luck in the contestsis

1 - 13 of 13