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I Love walikng In The Rain, Then No One knows That I am Crying

I walk in the rain,
it helps to ease up my pain,
I can let my tears fall,
and no one will know it at all.


the rain is my get away,
its where my tears like to stay,
it helps my heart,
to let my tears fall apart.


the falling rain is my place,
where I don't need to have grace,
its a place where I can cry,
where my tears can fly.


no one will never know,
of my lost soul,

no one will it at all,
how my tears fall,

 

just like the pouring rain.

 

 

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  • T.o.r.t.u.r.e. gold member
    April 1
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    so sad. i love the title.

    "the falling rain is my place,
    where I don't need to have grace,
    its a place where I can cry,
    where my tears can fly"

    Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest


  • Justified Inc.
    April 1

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    Hidden tears!

    I loved this!

    "the falling rain is my place,
    where I don't need to have grace,
    its a place where I can cry,
    where my tears can fly."

    I love the concept of walking in rain, crying and nobody knows! It's a beautiful image. The rain washing all the tears away and making them part of the downpour! What a lovely depiction of the pain and the cleansing of the rain!
    Beautiful!
    Bravo!

    Justified Inc.

  • T.o.r.t.u.r.e. gold member
    March 28
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    • if you would please space your name out in your AN like this : X x D r o w n . M e . D r y X x . Just out a space between each of your letters. Please. If you chose not to thats fine but i would like you you give me a reason. Thank you for putting your username in you’re an but I need it spaced as previously specified.


  • RareFlower
    March 25

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    perfect

    deep and full of emotions. the rain and the tears...
    I love the line ' to let my tears fall apart' How I know how this feels
    Thankyou for sharing
    RareFlower
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