You are more than a light in my life.
You love not only me but everything You have created!
and
Your detours of our life. . .
Are not to hurt us
but
They all have hidden blessings we sometimes don't see.
Without Your to help open our eyes
We would never get anywhere in this life.
for
Wisdom comes from learning
and
It's treasure cannot be bought with wealth.
Wisdom is a gift like our talents.
so
Please let us learn from our sufferings
That there is good in everything and everyone!
For as the Holy Bible states in Ecleasiastes. . .
Everything happens for a reason.
This includes our Birth and even DEATH.
therefore.
Help us live everyday. . .
As if it were our last.
for
Life is a blessing of just rewards.
dragonheart1
Author notes
quote prompt: Oh god~! You'ew light brings life into my form--ANONYMOUS
A contest entry
- life... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended March 31, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Do you let God light your Life?
Comments
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Yes I agree with you my friend..the life is indeed a blessings of just reawards..love the presentation my friend..and my thanks for the entry..
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i realy love it alot this is a very beautiful write i love it alot truly amazing joob on this good luck in the contest i hope you do well just by reading this i know you will do well so i really cant say good luck but none the less great job on this amazing write keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day -
aw abeautiful writegood luck in the contest
maralisa


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ALL is for the Good of those who love the Lord!
Once an editor, always an editor.
I noted these aspects: Without Your to help open our eyes -- You to help; Ecleasiastes -- Ecclesiastes. Also, the punctuation rule of thumb in poetry: use it properly and completely, or not at all. If you use it, always Uppercase the first word of each sentence; if you don't use it, Uppercase the beginning of each line and any word that stands alone.
This is such a wonderful testimony, one I think we all share; perhaps in different ways, but we all have made unscheduled detours from God's straight and narrow road. As you say, however, ALL-- isn't that word wonderful-- all things that happen to us in life is for our ultimate good. And, for every travesty there are blessings, if we choose to expect and look for them. As God said, "I do not bring these ills upon you, but if you will give them to Me, I will turn them into blessings.
Luv in Christ, BonnieQ








