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Waiting

you sit in the shadow of falling leaves
that like your dreams seem to float
breathing hope into tired lungs
like the fresh autumn air.

and it is there that you wait
shivering in the crisp coolness
of this new season and
of these new realizations

Because like pink silk leaves
that now swoop and drop to the grass
your dreams have lost their wind
and on this bench you wait

for your world to restart
and new dreams ease in to place
when the voids of loss are filled
with the shining light of love

then you will move on
leave this world of wait and cold.
Of everchanging but always the same
and move into sweet blissful chaos.

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Stagnant

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  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    September 11

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    This is an awesome poem. I loved the imagery and the metaphors. I really enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest.


  • Kira65
    June 13
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    I was just looking around and i found this, i love it!


  • Phallen
    March 17
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