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When I'm With You

There is so to much to say
I want to scream my heart away
I know for sure
I was told before
That we should be together

No need for a bitter fight
Between me and myself
I know for sure
It's no good to give in

It's time for actions
And less talking
Need affection
And less dreaming

I've try to say no
Tried to come up with reasons not to love you
But I know for sure
It will never happened

Cause when I'm with
I can't help but to bubble up with laughter
Cause when I'm with you
There is always a smile hiding
Cause when I'm with you
I'm just myself
I tell the truth

And I was told before
You love me too
That you flirt with me too
Just as much as I do

Author notes

Well I haven't wrote a poem in a while... And a lot has happened to me these few weeks... so I thought you guys could try to guess a part of all the drama that's been going on! ^-^ Hope u guys enjoy!

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  • poison ivy 1
    August 1
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    QBENO!!!

    OMG!!!THAT WAS SO GOOD LITTLE SIS!!!

  • this is really sweet! its okay to let yourself love someone, you cant fight it so mise well enjoy it!! great poem :]

  • Lucas McDrake
    March 18

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    CUTE!

    You have a boyfriend-either that, or you're planning to take action. Something along those lines, right? Or still hesitating to say the words out loud to him?
    Sorry, but I'm VERY obsessed with other people's love lives. It's just part of my personality. Mine, on the other hand...
    Anyway, my best wishes to you both! This poem was AWESOME!
    P.S.-write more poems like this! Why? There are a lot less poems actually about love than heart break.
    Of course, usually, people in love have better things to do than write poems...in that case, have fun!