Journey into depth of soul,
slippery slope or mere hell-hole;
taken despite wary warning
finds may cause massive mourning.
Reaching, rasping, regurgitating;
finding, feeling, formulating
thoughts unseen, untold, unknown,
long forgotten and forlorn.
Raped by my own regret;
insulted by my intellect;
scarred by scathing sarcasm;
flailing, falling into chasm.
Beaten, broken, left for dead,
blatant bleeding in my head;
holding heart in trembling hand;
regretting journey in this land.
Journey long and journey cold;
jarring, jolting, journey old;
turning over every stone;
journey taken all alone.
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What did you think
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This is really great. I really enjoyed reading through this. The imagery and alliteration were great and it seemed to have such a great beat going with it. Well done and thank you for entering my contest.
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This is pretty freakin' massive! Really enjoyed. Get a real Slayer/Slipknot vibe runnin this through the noggin. The brutality of the images convey the inner strength of the subject to continue on through all, alone.
Good Stuff
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Great job. Good luck and thanks for entering my contest.
-heva -
Interesting write, I like the alliteration used in some lines.
Bravo
♥ Kate -
really awesome job there; I'm still learning to do rhyme lol xxx
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BRILLIANT JOB!!! Thank you for entering my contest. you had a wonderful way with the words and the flow was simply perfect. Good luck in this contest
Damien
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its sort of inspiring. its definitely powerful and passionate. so yes, well done!
great write. thanks for entering this.
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the rhyme was done really well...and emotions expressed wonderfully...
Good luck
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I love it.
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Wow. Amazing. This has such a good flow and rhyme. Thanks for entering
~Lae -
Poignant
Rush or postponement, hesitation,
Often journey undertaken
Stirs much interred 'neath mists of time,
Hopes unmet, dreams : frozen rime.
Nagging needs through introspection
Insight gain - what seems mistaken
Draws life onwards saving bacon
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